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By Debbiee
Another shot from under the bridge same series as previous uploads a few weeks ago, I really liked her expression and eye contact in this one but was unsure about the composition, does it work?

Tags: Child Portraits and people

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Richsr 15 91 223 England
27 Jul 2011 12:30PM
The eye contact works and the expression is good too, however of me the location of the head with the item to the rhs makes it look cramped into the corner of the image. Might have been better if she had bee slightly more central between the supports.
Regards Richard
banehawi Plus
18 2.9k 4336 Canada
27 Jul 2011 3:09PM
Technically really good. I agree with Richard re composition, - her head is too close to the frame edge, and the tree. Much of the shot is taken up with her arms, makes the image unbalanced. May have worked is shot in portrait mode, further back to allow more space. However its still a pleasant shot that many would be happy with.

Debbiee 16 136 6 United Kingdom
27 Jul 2011 3:28PM
kind of what I thought re composition thanks, It is just unusual for me to catch even a hint of a smile from her where her eyes are open as well, as she tends to squint when smiling.
paulbroad 15 131 1294 United Kingdom
27 Jul 2011 10:01PM
Composition is tight. Her hair, on my screen, merges completely with the dark background. Otherwise yopur mono conversion is good, but I would have stayed with colour, which would then probably solve the hair problem.


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