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Still Waiting

By Debbiee
This image was taken at the same time as waiting from my portfolio, I added a single texture to this one and lowered the saturation, does it work?

Tags: Child Digitally manipulated Portraits and people

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banehawi Plus
15 2.1k 4036 Canada
30 Jul 2011 1:11AM
Now heres the heavy artillery!


This is really good, - wonderful expression, great background and torn edges. The only suggest I might have is that strap with the chevrons at the right, - perhaps it can be cloned out, - its an attention seeker.



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Philo 9 99 83 England
30 Jul 2011 12:46PM
I agree with Willie that this is a very strong portrait and makes great use of the texture. My only issue is the eyes: yes they are the focal point and need to stand out but they just seem too bright and at odds with the rest of the image. Only my opinion and obviously Willie doesn't have an issue with them so it may just be me!
Excellent work though.
Phil
Jestertheclown 11 8.0k 252 England
30 Jul 2011 9:06PM
I agree with both of you.
The chevron strap was the second thing that caught ny attention.
The first was the eyes. They are well presented but they just don't fit in with the rest of it.

Bren.
Debbiee 13 136 6 United Kingdom
31 Jul 2011 9:20AM
So a bit more work to be done on it yet Smile, thanks for pointing out these issues. I really appreciate it.

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