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Tonyd3 15 1.1k 18 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2005 9:24AM
Nice lighting on the left hand side but i feel you need a little more light on the face.
Regards
Tony

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tull 16 181 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2005 9:39AM
The best so far mate,love the tones and pose,well done you.

Mark.
johntisbury Plus
16 22 10 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2005 9:49AM
Model is a little too central in the frame, and has a nasty crease in her neck from the pose. Good hair light and like the lighting ratio between main light and fill/shadows.
debbiehardy 16 363 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2005 9:56AM
Thanks, Tony, Mark and John...I should have explained the lighting conditions - there was just a spotlight, bright overhead lights which I turned off and not much room to move lol.
I almost cropped differently, taking off the right and adding a black space to the left. You're right about her neck, John and I should have noticed, but sometimes you look at your own images too long and don't see somethin obvious! I appreciate the time taken to comment.
User_Removed 15 32 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2005 10:12AM
Nice pose and lovley model - like the presentation
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Jeff
panda 15 5 1 England
13 Oct 2005 10:29AM
I like the lighting, has a nice warm feel to it, and the crease in her neck is not a problem for me. Could be a tad sharper.

Phil
debbiehardy 16 363 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2005 10:36AM
Thankyou, Jeff and Phil. I'm on ISO800 here and hand held, so it is on the soft side. Great to have so many constructive comments. Debbie.
Pegon 14 78 1 England
13 Oct 2005 11:04AM
Another good one Debbie,I think you've done well with one light,nice work.(Hope you enjoyed the fayre up Towneley).
Pete.
sugar jones 15 185
17 Oct 2005 12:55AM
Lovely capture. We can get all too tied up with technicalities on this site but that is a beautiful capture. I've recently tried some self portraits with a similar pose but the creases in my neck look even worse I look about 90 years of age!
SugarJ*
debbiehardy 16 363 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2005 5:05AM
Many thanks, Pete.
Sugar - what a lovely thing to say (not about your neck crease lol)
Thanks, Debbie Smile
paul_indigo 16 259 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2005 1:06PM
Pleasing light, good expression and composition - excellent.
debbiehardy 16 363 United Kingdom
22 Oct 2005 1:13PM
Thankyou Paul, that means a lot,coming from you Smile

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