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hands - Buddy Group 5 - self portrait

By Pete      
I'm already in one challenge (group 2) but decided to have another go. This one is using a budget ceiling light I bought a few years ago and modified into a ring light. Total cost less than 30.
I placed it on my knee pointing upwards while I took the shot. I started out straight portraits but they looked rubbish so I introduced the hands. I converted to black & white and added a blue fill layer. I like blue!

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Tags: Portraits and people

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NevP 17 853 13 Canada
16 Jul 2009 3:18AM
I like v2 Pete, the straight mono has more impact for me. Nice job.
Hoffy 18 262 16 England
16 Jul 2009 8:54AM
I like version one, adds more spooky.
tigertimb 15 40 66 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2009 9:04AM
What happened to the mild mannered guy portrayed in the previous version Tongue
The blue tones, tighter crop and rotation all help over the original and I love the intensity in those eyes.
Great scary stuff, but if this is your normal look when framing possible shots it might explain why there aren't any smiling kids in your portfolio Wink
Tim
ade_mcfade 18 15.2k 216 England
16 Jul 2009 9:30AM
....jesus, no one's going to give you hassle about the site once they've seen this!

The catch lights in the eyes make them leap out from the rest of the scene - especially on the blue version of the image.

position of the face, just off right, with the hands filling the rest of the scene is spot on - I'd maybe have gone for the middle,. but having seen this, I prefer the off centre look.

so is this the group for people with hand fetishes?

Wink
Pete 21 18.8k 97 England
16 Jul 2009 9:52AM

Quote:but if this is your normal look when framing

Lol.. no, in light of what Ade and co have been doing, I decided to change from me normal mellow-friendly look as another variation on a self portrait. You should have seen some of the rejects.
Btw this was done in the small home office against the wall. I took this approach to illustrate you don't need expensive kit to do this kind of thing.
tigertimb 15 40 66 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2009 10:11AM
This raises the one question for me - does a truly great portrait need to do more than just show the image of someone; should it not portray their character too and capture something of the essence of who they are?

And I'm not saying that this doesn't Pete; there's obviously a side of you that likes doing these fun inventive shots; or maybe there's a whole other side of you beneath the mellow-friendly exterior Wink

Tim
ChristineL 17 39 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2009 10:22AM
V2 for me Pete, somehow the mono shadows add to the scariness.
Just needs long fingernails nowSmile
Chris.
Coleslaw 17 13.4k 28 Wales
16 Jul 2009 12:50PM
Again, I have no idea how you focus on the eyes....Sad
The highlights on the eyes make it for me as well.
riprap007 18 1.6k 37 England
16 Jul 2009 3:09PM
the budget lighting set up emulates a ring flash well (and is far cheaper!), having done a few of these myself I'm aware of how tricky they can be, I have however posted a mod with a suggested crop, just to help add some further emphasis to hand spread and eyes
Angi_Wallace 14 321 11 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2009 4:30PM
Great idea, Ive joined this group and will post my contribution up over the next few days. Not sure where to start and portraits are not my forte , so I suppose its good to practice.
I like the processing you have done on this one and the darkness to it. The only thing I cvan see that I would change is the positioning of the hand on the left, but thats probably just me.
16 Jul 2009 4:38PM
Looks good to me Pete.....Smile)

Maybe I shot you one day in my studio....lol

Carsten
croberts 18 2.2k 8 Ireland
16 Jul 2009 5:32PM
i prefer the original unedited shot. It has a more honest feel to it, and a more vulnerable kind of vibe. A bit more "don't hurt me" rather than "come any closer and i'll hurt you"

i like it.
beckas 19 5 1 United States
16 Jul 2009 5:50PM
V1 is my fave. I love the feeling that it portrays, it makes it kind of spooky. I know that with SP's, it's sometimes difficult to get the correct focus point and it's spot on in this photo. Well done!

I have a hard time critiquing which is why I usually don't. To me, this photo is perfect as is. If I had to change one thing about it, I guess I would crop a slight bit off the top of the photo but I am not sure that it would improve it.
martin.w Plus
20 616 29 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2009 8:37PM
I prefer this one, proving to me at least that the simple approach works best. V1 for me, the blue tint just seems more effective Smile
DolphinLady 16 54 1 Wales
16 Jul 2009 8:47PM
Got to go with V2 here as to me, that one is the spookiest.
If that's what you were aiming for, you have got it right...
Hilary
Diana 16 2.0k 19 Netherlands
16 Jul 2009 8:58PM
the home made ring flash is superb

please share how you done this in more detail...

sorry I made you look more scarey....just messing Smile

Diana
javam Plus
18 1.1k 19 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2009 10:33PM
Nothing wrong with V1&2 but I think V3 is the best of the bunch. Your eyes stand out even more and I really like the tone of the background, sets the skin tones off well.

Unrelated question, are you trying out the Nikon or have you jumped ship?

Neil
Goggz 15 2.3k 72 Wales
21 Jul 2009 12:42AM
You aren't tanning yourself evenly Pete Wink

I like the slightly sinister V1. I'm a blue fan too...

CHeers, GOggz
Mari 19 1.8k United Kingdom
21 Jul 2009 6:32PM
I like V3 best as a composition Pete, its more dynamic, but think with the colouring on V1
Paul Morgan 21 19.7k 6 England
28 Jul 2009 11:42PM
Its V3 for me, have you no pics of padded cells from your asylum trip, would make a great background.
rowarrior 14 4.4k 9 Scotland
1 Aug 2009 1:22AM
I like all 3, hard to choose which, but what is it with the men and big hand obsession in this group?!

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