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webjam 15 292 11 Netherlands
8 Jan 2009 9:07PM
Your niece is a beautiful model - but she seems a little bit sad here...
Personally I would be tempted to crop off a bit of the lefthand side and the bottom of the frame - keeping all the attention to her lovely face.
What do you think?

Jacqueline

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Dinda 15 90 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2009 9:16PM
Thanks for looking Jacqueline - I had tried cropping, but wanted to keep her hair in - might post some of the others which I have cropped more closely another time.
woodlark 15 545 1 United Kingdom
8 Jan 2009 9:35PM
Im not good with portraits, but personally i think you have done a good job, i like the thoughtful pose and natural lighting.
peterkin 16 647 England
8 Jan 2009 9:36PM
Lovely portrait with a contemplative expression and I like the lighting. Not sure which version I prefer, but if pushed would opt for the colour portrait.

Peter
Pegon 14 78 1 England
8 Jan 2009 9:46PM
A beautiful portrait. Nice lighting and pose. Both versions look great.
Pete.
jonathanbp 11 99 Thailand
8 Jan 2009 11:07PM
like both versions - Jonathan
Grimm 13 587 6
8 Jan 2009 11:25PM
Mono.
Wellspring 10 86 37 England
9 Jan 2009 12:39AM
A lovely touching portrait - excellent - well done. You have a beautiful niece too!

I definitely prefer the colour version but not because it is in colour. If you notice in the colour version, the hair is darker on the left hand side. This means that my eye is drawn to the area of greatest contrast with is her lovely face/expression, thus making it a stronger image for me.

I also like that way you have kept all her hair in.

I definately like the ruddiness of her complexion - I think it is in keeping with her age and demeanor.

I particularly like the gentle way the light falls away on the side of her face, sculpting her cheek gently.

You have kept her nose inside her faceline as well as her left eye; there is not too much white of her eyes showing but I would not want any more for my taste.

A delightful portrait - one of many more to come I hope.
John
Dinda 15 90 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2009 6:06PM
Thank you all for looking and commenting, particularly for indicating your preferences! John, your detailed comment very welcome.
EllieEdge 11 15 42 Norway
11 Jan 2009 9:14PM
Great Expression.
- Ellie

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