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At rest B & W

By DPhillips
Here in B & W for comment.

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devlin 6 652 39 India
9 Jan 2011 3:25PM
Hi Dorian,

I guess you already know about the masts distracting Smile so i wont go into it, i offer up an alternative viewpoint if indeed stepping the boats was the objective.

Cheers and Hope this helps

PS: - Always a good idea to mention in the description what you were hoping to achieve Smile

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banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3457 Canada
9 Jan 2011 3:45PM
I just loaded a toned mod of the version I loaded on you last shot. The different again being that I started with a brighter original, then used a tone to get some warmth.



regards


Willie
DPhillips 5 20 South Africa
9 Jan 2011 5:08PM
Thank you both. I find merit in your ideas and will act accordingly.

Dorian
Tooth 11 5.8k 227 Ireland
10 Jan 2011 1:55AM
I like the crops...as well as the masts, I found the triangle of sky top left a distraction tending to drag the eye out of the picture

Stephen
paulbroad 8 114 1033 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2011 1:35PM
I preferred the colour version, but see my comments on that one. People often seem to convert to B&W out of fashion rather than the image requiring it.

paul

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