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ErrolC

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  • Rebeca

    Hi
    This is a nice shot, but I'd like to offer some suggestions that in my opinion will make it even better. First, I agree with dudler about the sharpness, except I would go further and say there really must be something that is sharp in a soft focus shot, and if it's a portrait it's the eyes that must be sharp. Otherwise it looks as if the whole thing is out of focus. To my mind, the cropping is also a bit tight. Just a little more space all around would be nicer with less of a cramped feeling. Lastly, I would also go for the model's head being less tilted. The head must be tilted from the vertical, you're right, but this is too far. These changes would I think make your good shot even better.
    • 27 Feb 2019 8:24AM
  • “Red hair, sir, in my opinion, is dangerous.”

    Fabulous lighting. Great shop. I would crop a little bit off the top and a bit from the right so that she's not so centrally placed. What do you think? But that's a minor point. Great model, great expression, great pose ... everything. Well done.
    • 20 Mar 2015 1:49PM