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the beaten path

By fighterjockey
Hi everyone!
I'll let the photo speak this time.
Does it say something to you?

thanks for visiting.
C&C most welcome.

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paulbroad 14 131 1293 United Kingdom
4 Jul 2010 8:01AM
I need a haircut? Well spotted, but possibly needs to be a bit larger in the frame and composionally more to the right, or left - to move from the middle.

Paul
pamelajean Plus
15 1.6k 2238 United Kingdom
4 Jul 2010 7:48PM
Does it say something to me? Well, it leaves me with a lot of questions. What are they carrying? Where are they going? Does the man's surprised look at you mean that he is doing something illegal, or is he just surprised at being photographed?
I'd like to have seen more of the third person behind the other two. The clothes are nicer colours, they all have some red on, which looks good against the grey and green background. The light on the path helps to lead the eye in the direction they are moving. I think I might tone down the bright bit of sky between the trees because it's quite distracting. I like the image very much, but agree the people are too central, though I haven't done a modification because I wasn't sure where to crop it without losing the pathway.
Pamela.

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