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By firejpj
This is a first for me. All comments and crits will be appreciated.

Tags: Light Heart General Specialist and abstract Digital art Ring



miptog 17 3.6k 68 United Kingdom
3 Sep 2007 4:14PM
Firstly, I like this shot. Comments:

- The heart shadow is quite angular and could be better "heart-shaped"
- A softer and fainter "orange glow" may be more appealing.

imander 16 388 7 United Kingdom
3 Sep 2007 4:29PM
excellent shot,well done
macdaniel 17 16 3 Netherlands
3 Sep 2007 5:05PM
to be honest: the thumb looks more attractive than the larger one. This happens more often >
in the thumb the impression of a book is not visible and the light seems to form a heart also. So I would suggest to you to make another try with less book and a more pronounced light-heart. But for a first try it actually pretty good > alfred
3 Sep 2007 8:01PM
Superb photo

Lou_C 15 755 2 England
3 Sep 2007 9:56PM
I've seen this type of shot before, and IMHO I prefer the more traditional ring shot. I find the book very distracting
firejpj 16 South Africa
4 Sep 2007 6:49AM
Hi All,
Thanks for looking and the constructive crits. Do appreciate.
paulbroad 15 131 1294 United Kingdom
4 Sep 2007 7:31AM
Excellent - I like it, central composition and all.

MartaHari 15 1 Spain
4 Sep 2007 7:34PM
I like it a lot. But I too have seen a similar shot somewhere - the sketching looks attractive, but overall, the shot it seems to me a bit "overdetailed" - a "B+" with me.
firejpj 16 South Africa
5 Sep 2007 1:43PM
Thanks for looking.
20 Nov 2007 11:08AM
Great idea and love the way the ring makes the heart shape!

I think the images of the people are a little distracting for me, my eyes keep moving away to them rather than the main subject (the ring).

Great shot though!
Lee Smile

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