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18/05/2010 - 9:17 AM

Through the grass, darkly

Through the grass, darklyI really love this different angle and viewpoint, only thing I would change is to get rid of the big white blob above the lamb's head, it's really distracting.

That's one thing I've learned from entering external and internal comps with my club is never have big white blobs that don't need to be there, especially on the edge of the image. It's brighter than the lamb's head and the eye always goes to the brightest object.

The lamb is very cute and looks like it's smiling Smile
22/06/2009 - 10:45 PM


GrapesOK, here goes my critique, never done it before so ....

I love the colour green but I would prefer a darker background to make the grapes stand out more, not necessarily a black background or anything but just a few shades darker than it is already.

I love the fact you've used natural daylight and not an on camera flash, I have such a hatred for on camera flash I feel my blood physically boil when I see it in photos.

I feel the grapes are a bit 'soft' without much texture and no definite sharpness of focus, maybe wetting them first to catch the light and brighten them up could be an idea and I'd also like to see you go in a bit closer too or else change the composition of the grapes rather than having them straight down the middle in a line.

Hope that was OK, please don't hate me!