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Lone jogger

By Focus_Man
Whilst at New Brighton looking to see what ships were arriving in the Mersey, this scene came upon me rapidly (well somewhat slowly really, but she was moving at a reasonable pace). I though it the ideal case for treatment as under "Rule of Thirds". Do you agree or otherwise?

I tried to convey the sort of "lonliness of the long distance runner" as she was in isolation on the seafront.

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iancrowson Plus
7 211 146 United Kingdom
2 Feb 2013 6:11PM
Good capture. Yes, perfect rule of thirds.
As your picture is about the runner I done a mod crop out the distant shore line and building, maybe this focuses the eye?

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paulbroad 10 123 1235 United Kingdom
3 Feb 2013 8:54AM
It's the background top I find intrusive, Frank. A lot of detail that pulls the eyes, even from the red. I would crop down quite tightly to produce a more letterbox composition. Otherwise, nice.

Focus_Man 7 481 631 United Kingdom
3 Feb 2013 9:03AM
Well guys I wanted to keep the top in as it shows my home town and i suppose I am biased in that direction, but as you both suggest removal, I go along with that.

Scrolling down on screen to remove the top you are correct.

Thanks for comments, much appreciated.


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