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Cracked Ice.

By foggytwo
Twas a cold Otober the thirty first.
With a fog, one could easily slice.
When I came upon this frozen pond.
Containing a mosaic of ice.
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I pondered by the icy edge.
If the shortcut I should trust.
To step upon the unsafe ice.
Which didn`t look too robust.
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As my best foot I put forward.
Having just held back in time.
Then a loud crack from the ice pack.
Suddenly a face in a rapid climb.
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Peering through the ice,she let out a moan.
Which scared me half to death.
It was then the lady spoke to me.
Which really took my breath.
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She was the ghost of a certain Nan Fiskin.
Accused of being a witch.
She was burned alive at the village green.
Then thrown into a drainage ditch.
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She cursed this pond where she ended up.
Pulling her down before she was done.
So she haunts this pond for evermore.
And has done since 1701.
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After Nan had told her tale.
I`d forgot about the time.
Then she slowly slipped away.
A victim of arganized crime.
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I will never forget that cold,cold night.
The night of October thirty first.
When Nan popped up for a little chat.
To tell me we were all cursed.

Tags: General Digital art Humour and fun

Voters: mad-dogs, Cormy, stephenscott and 15 more


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Mynett 11 142 6 United Kingdom
29 Oct 2009 9:27PM
oh wow what a picture and what a great poem toooooo

toooo scared to look at any more.... lol

Linda Wink well done happy halloween

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photophantom 11 108 3 Philippines
29 Oct 2009 9:34PM
super work Pete, both the image and the poem. Excellent.
Dennis
mrswoolybill Plus
13 1.7k 2099 United Kingdom
29 Oct 2009 9:46PM
You really should have waited until I got my make-up sorted...
Moira
Coast 11 1.6k 292 United Kingdom
30 Oct 2009 8:30AM
Delightful - Great poem and illustrated with a great photo. Love it.

Paul
brownsilent 12 7 2 United Kingdom
30 Oct 2009 9:11AM
Oooooooooooooooooch! I'm happy not to be in your area tomorrow if there are such scary ghosts popping up ...........!
Well done and great poem as ever to go with it.
Johanna
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
30 Oct 2009 8:08PM
My thanks to everyone for the above comments,appreciated.
Pete.
leginR 11 England
30 Oct 2009 10:23PM

Quote:Delightful - Great poem and illustrated with a great photo. Love it.


regards Nigel
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
31 Oct 2009 7:13PM
Thanks for the comment Nigel, appreciated mate.
Pete.
5 Nov 2009 5:25PM
superb work pete,i will have to sleep with the light on tonight.lol.ray
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
5 Nov 2009 8:00PM
Thank you for your comment Ray.
Pete.
Ridgeway 13 222 2 Ireland
5 Nov 2009 8:46PM
Just found this one,nice work and poem,
Love the idea of the ice being the basis of the shot,

Aidan,,
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
25 Nov 2009 6:59PM
Thanks for commenting Aidan,appreciated.
Pete.

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