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The Vortex.

By foggytwo
This image started life as a pic of blue light shining through gas bubbles in a lemonade bottle.

Can you imagine how it will end.
Come on a journey with me, if you will.
I`ll show you a vision of the future.
As the prophecy starts to fulfil.
On that day,the sun will no longer shine.
The sky will turn a deep shade of blue.
A Vortex will appear in the heavens.
The sky will appear all askew.
Faces will fill up with horror.
The blue layers will superimpose.
Many will head for church and catherdral.
As the Vortex just grows and grows.
With the sky being empty of starlight.
The space station is seen flying by.
Struck by lightning it bursts into flames.
They cannot believe what they see in the sky.
Man is powerless in this situation.
By events that he cant quite control.
The Vortex spins faster by ingesting.
Soon to become a black hole.
I wonder if man deserves such a fate.
Our world has far too much to lose.
Mankind can alter the future by choice.
So starting now, let us choose.
Let me bring you back from your journey.
Sit and think for a moment or two.
What will you do some day in the future.
If the sky turns a deep shade of blue.

Tags: General Digitally manipulated Digital art

Voters: Daisymaye, CarolG, cats_123 and 23 more

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Daisymaye 11 23 16 Canada
26 Feb 2010 3:00PM
And ended up the eye of the storm. Great idea and really well achieved............Sandy

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CarolG 13 199 20 Greece
26 Feb 2010 3:11PM
An amazing creation. Carol
cats_123 Plus
15 4.9k 29 Northern Ireland
26 Feb 2010 3:55PM
Live long and Prosper Smile
Mynett 11 142 6 United Kingdom
26 Feb 2010 4:57PM

this is so eye catching and pretty till you read the message of your clever poem

thought provoking work

so nice to see you back

Linda Wink
User_Removed 15 386 2 United Kingdom
26 Feb 2010 6:39PM
Excellent as always. Smile
Eviscera 13 1.1k 149 United Kingdom
26 Feb 2010 8:02PM
Thats a good way to post a vision ! union of words to the image.
bricurtis Plus
14 2.3k 50 England
26 Feb 2010 11:24PM
Yes - super image Pete and a thought provoking poem.
DP_Imagery 15 24 6 Wales
27 Feb 2010 10:20AM
Brilliant creation Pete Smile

foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
27 Feb 2010 2:45PM
Thanks to all above for the comments,they are appreciated.
MickS 14 23 14 England
27 Feb 2010 3:43PM
Watcha Pete,
clever bit of work.
Paree 14 616 3
27 Feb 2010 5:47PM
What will you do some day in the future.
If the sky turns a deep shade of blue

probably go to the nearest chocolate shop,
and buy a quantity so great,
so when at last i meet him,
my face will say my fate,

love this one Pete
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
27 Feb 2010 7:17PM
My thanks to Mick and Maureen for your comments.
Maureen .......

If the sky turns a deep shade of blue.
And the end of the world is nigh.
Then Maureen can have her chocolate.
Me, I`ll end with a big apple pie.

Thanks again.
leginR 11 England
27 Feb 2010 8:01PM
Nice to see you back Pete brilliant image & thanks for your comment on my pic.
regards Nigel
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
27 Feb 2010 8:09PM
Cheers Nigel, your comment is appreciated.
Paree 14 616 3
27 Feb 2010 8:33PM
so with chocolate and pie,
and the end of time,
you share yours
and I'll share mine
27 Feb 2010 9:07PM
hi pete,exellent words,super image,great to see your work again.ray
photophantom 11 108 3 Philippines
28 Feb 2010 11:34AM
superb creation Pete, matched with supreme prophecy
28 Feb 2010 1:38PM
very deep and thought provoking! amazing image ! gill
foggytwo 16 36 1 Scotland
10 Mar 2010 3:21PM
My thanks to, Maureen, Ray, Dennis and Gillian for your comments. Appreciated.

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