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surf bar closed for the winter

By freda
Jan 12, near Carrapateira, Portugal. looked like a deserted surfers bar closed for the winter.

Tags: Landscape and travel

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nonur Plus
7 15 9 Turkey
5 Mar 2012 8:12AM
Very nice shot!

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freda 4 United Kingdom
5 Mar 2012 10:28AM
hi frank, did as you suggested and it does look better of centre and with added exposure, thanks for your help.


Freda
paulbroad 8 108 988 United Kingdom
5 Mar 2012 2:13PM
Yes - potentially very impressive but needs to be off centre and a bit brighter to add impact. Looks too monotone at the moment.

paul
freda 4 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2012 8:48AM
Hi Paul, did add a modification as suggested are you able to see it? if so is this a better look?

thanks Freda
DRicherby 7 269 725 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2012 11:13AM
A good shot, except for the composition, which is fixed perfectly in your mod. You've given a great sense of desolation and, in this case, I think it works well to have the front of the bar in shadow as it makes it look dark and unwelcoming.

I'd love to see this next to a comparison shot from the same viewpoint in the height of summer.

Dave.

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