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digicammad 13 22.0k 39 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2013 2:15PM
I'm not sure what story you wanted to tell with this but for me it doesn't say anything. The composition is a little awkward, with the daffodil directing the eyes out of frame and nothing to drag them back and the overall image seems not to be sure whether it wants to be minimal or not.

In my opinion a letterbox crop works a little better, giving more emphasis to the daffodil and making it feel almost as if it is hanging its head in shame.

Ian

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derrymaine 3 17 Greece
19 Apr 2013 6:51AM
beautiful and nostalgic image
gaborfoto 4 1 United Kingdom
19 Apr 2013 10:40AM

Quote:I'm not sure what story you wanted to tell with this but for me it doesn't say anything. The composition is a little awkward, with the daffodil directing the eyes out of frame and nothing to drag them back and the overall image seems not to be sure whether it wants to be minimal or not.

In my opinion a letterbox crop works a little better, giving more emphasis to the daffodil and making it feel almost as if it is hanging its head in shame.

Ian



Ian I think this picture isn't for you - that's all Smile
Thanks your critique
digicammad 13 22.0k 39 United Kingdom
19 Apr 2013 10:52AM
No problem, each to their own.

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