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djh698 12 3.7k 6 United Kingdom
4 Mar 2013 1:20PM
I would have cloned out the frame above her head-otherwise well presented
David

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banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3494 Canada
4 Mar 2013 6:20PM
I really like the pose and the set up Gabor. I dont know for sure if you were going for a high key look, but what I think this needs is a wider tonal range. This range starts at mid grey, and goes to white, so it looks greyish, and quite flat wheres a high key does maintain a good black level. Definitely clone the frame, its merging with her head.

Looking at composition, I would lower her in the frame, and add space on the left for an A4 format, - looks better to me. Theres a nice feature where theres a reflection under her shoes that cant be seen unless you deal with the black level.


Hope this helps,



regards


Willie (if you want the mod I did just contact me at wbaneham@gmail.com)

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