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By garreth55
emirates ek18 just departing manchester runway 23r

Tags: General Transport

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3510 Canada
18 Aug 2012 9:05PM
Its a good shot. Perhaps zooming out would have included more of the left wing, but perhaps there was some obstructions you wanted to exclude. One tip, - when shooting into the sky, use a +1 exposure compensation in general, as the cameras meter will be unduly influenced by the brightness, and can underexpose somewhat. This isnt too bad as the plane itself is largely a bright colour, but a little work on exposure makes a difference.


I have uploaded a mod to show what I mean, - just a curves adjustment to brighten and improve contrast.



regards



Willie

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garreth55 5 1 England
19 Aug 2012 12:36PM
thanks for the comments willie any comments are appriciated and hopefully help me to move on to the next level
Focus_Man 6 481 631 United Kingdom
20 Aug 2012 9:22AM
You have done well here with sensible EXIF (high shutter speed for your 300mm FL) except that I think I would have stopped down to f8 and with 1/1250sec you would still be able to hand hold successfully.

Mind you I would have preferred to see this closer to 220 FL so that all of the plane could be within your frame. A positive exposure compensation is generally required but given the dark sky the need lessens a little.

Nice nevertheless.

Frank
paulbroad 9 116 1056 United Kingdom
22 Aug 2012 8:09AM
I like this in general - lots of impact, but it is a touch under exposed which gives the impression of a colour cast towards cyan. The aircraft should be white? White plane and bright sky + under exposure with most metering systems on auto. I use a hand meter when I can in difficult situations with incident readings, but a good hand meter is now rather expensive.

Paul

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