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firstlight 11 2 3 United Kingdom
8 Jun 2020 12:56PM
Lovely image.

Itís often hard to judge or critique an image when there is no artists statement as to the intention behind the image. Youíre just left to your own personal view of the emotion, intent, narrative or itís technical merits. This leaves lots of competing opinions...

For what it may be worth... I personally think this is a wonderful Image, and a lovely model. For my own preference I would perhaps remove the chair back on the bottom right of the image (the high contrast between the dark background and the white chair competes for my attention) and what looks like a bra cup (?) on the modelís left breast which cuts across what would be the smooth draping of her blouse. One other element that I would personally look to are the highlights (specifically on her shoulder - which, while an integral part of the image, I feel pulls too much attention away from the face. Plus the highlight on the hairline of her hair).

This is all perhaps quite picky though from what is a really good image and very subjective. I particularly like models pose youíve captured here. If the chair hadnít been in the image I might have thought youíd put a little Dutch tilt to the picture.

You certainly get my vote 👍
GregorP 16 4 Slovenia
8 Jun 2020 1:30PM
Thank you @firstlight for your constructive comment.
Owdman Plus
5 6 19 United Kingdom
8 Jun 2020 4:07PM
I like the attractive face, the hair and the jewels, which in my opinion provide the focus of the image. As with firstlight I find the chair and the blouse a distraction, so my temptation would be to crop it all out entirely. The label of the top (I presume) is also showing against the hair. You could always put it up for mods.
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