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long way home

By Gubi
critique is wolcome, mod too. i need to improve Smile

Tags: Architecture Slovakia Apollo Bratislava

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I_KNOOOW 12 8 Canada
23 Feb 2009 4:08PM
This is an interesting Photo with some good points, I like the leading lines in the photo. unfortunately they run into an area that is mostly black this both adds to the photo by asking where dose this path go and being to dark takes away from the photo. Over all the photo looks to be under exposed, and the white box in the top right, that looks like a sign, is overexposed. The white light attached to the column also distracts from the photo and could be cloned out. I am also not a fan of putting text into the photo, it is a good title but not needed to be in the photo. Overall i like this very interesting photo.
Brewster 16 4 Scotland
23 Feb 2009 7:23PM
I agree with some of the above comments; the image is a bit dark and the bright bits distract from the main subject. I think if you tried to position yourself so that any lights or lit-up signs were hidden by the pillars, then you could use a longer exposure which would brighten up the whole shot. A tripod might be needed depending how much light is available. I still like the image as it is but as you asked for critique... Wink

Bruce

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