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Chinga Plus
9 3 1 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2019 11:18AM
How lovely !! Good images...
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rontear Plus
16 21 8 England
8 Dec 2019 11:40AM
Great visual idea, Helen. My award.
Ron
8 Dec 2019 11:45AM
Works well as three together.
Alan

PS just a thought. How about the guy in the middle?
cats_123 Plus
15 4.9k 29 Northern Ireland
8 Dec 2019 12:04PM
I agree, guy in the middle and possibly change his background to complement the two ladies....if you are really skilled, have the ladies holding the man's picture??? 😁😁😁
8 Dec 2019 12:21PM
have the man in the middle and then flip one of the ladies so that they both look into the triptych..

a risky variant would be to flip the person inside the smaller frames they are holding.. just to add a bit more 'strangeness' (something unexpected/unsettling..) to the image.....it may make people wonder a bit more about what is going on...and thus they look at the image a bit longer.

any chance of copying the relief of the frames they are holding onto the overall frame as that is now a smooth one..

just my thoughts... good luck, it is already great as it is..
Robert
bornstupix2 2 91 1 France
8 Dec 2019 12:29PM
My only observation is the mans pic is somewhat more pale in the back ground and his face a little less sharp.
To change this would be a complete rebuild as his framed images would then require some work. Whether it is necessary to do it is totally a matter of opinion as the image is excellent as is...just a minor point, which as an ex club judge I am aware we look for from time to time.
8 Dec 2019 12:42PM
I love triptychs, and this one is very good. Three very strong images working well together. But I have to agree with bornstupix2 regarding the different background in the third image.

Alan
mrswoolybill Plus
13 1.7k 2114 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2019 12:44PM
The guy belongs on the right, because he is leaning in towards the others (as is the lady on the left).
But I'd like to see the left hand panel lightened and brightened just a wee bit, she seems to be out in the cold.
It's a beautiful idea.
TrevBatWCC Plus
11 13 13 England
8 Dec 2019 1:24PM
An excellent and eye-catching creation, Helena. Before reading any of the others' suggestions, I thought about placing the man in the centre, and placing the lady in the centre to the left, and the lady on the left over to the right. Although their eyes aren't directly looking out of the scene, their heads would then be facing in towards the centre. Also, as Moira says, the lady on the left could be brightened up a little, and with a touch more contrast. However having said all that, it's still a great image, love it, and it's certainly different, standing out from the crowd in today's uploads 👍
Trev 😀
dudler Plus
16 995 1552 England
8 Dec 2019 4:00PM
A touch more brightness on the left, maybe?
chase Plus
14 1.3k 276 England
9 Dec 2019 1:23PM
I do like this idea, very well thought out and put together.
I too would have opted for the man to be in the middle and flipped one of the ladies so they are both looking inward. The Lady on the left could perhaps stand lightening a touch but well done.

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