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Self portrait

By Herve  

Tags: Self portrait Portraits and people

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Richsr Plus
8 90 219 England
15 Sep 2011 9:05AM
The self portrait looks good but at this size not easy to give feedback. I would recommend you have a look at the section on sizing and uploading images for this site.

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JackAllTog Plus
6 4.3k 58 United Kingdom
15 Sep 2011 12:32PM
As Rich says on sizing, lighting looks good but your pose looks a tad awkward. perhaps the light on your nose is too strong - lets see larger...
banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3344 Canada
15 Sep 2011 6:06PM
And if the photo is accurate, not a Junior member, - juniors refer to the age of the member, not how long theyve been on the site. But, welcome Herve!



Willie
MrsS 9 4.5k 18 England
15 Sep 2011 8:17PM
Hi, I wonder if you would be so kind as to amend your date of birth, as you are currently showing up in our under 16's gallery! Smile

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paulbroad 8 108 986 United Kingdom
16 Sep 2011 8:11AM
Strange effect here. Obviously size is wrong, but the colours are pastel and you appear to have strong light from left and right - especially left, resulting in detail burn out. You needed to expose for those highlights and deal with the shadows later.

Paul

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