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pamelajean Plus
12 1.0k 1996 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2011 7:19PM
Hello, Ian. I like the strong lines in this, and also the contrast of the windows, and the patterns they make on the floor. Because there is very little colour in the image, I was tempted to do a mono (see 1st mod) and adjust levels for more contrast. I also rotated the image in order to straighten the far line of the floor, as I felt there needed to be a straight line somewhere. I also cropped, which was necessary after the rotation, but especially on the right side because I wanted to eliminate a bit of the large dark areas top right, which kept drawing my eye. My second mod goes the opposite way, and I tried to bring out the colours that were present, especially the blue in the windows and the gold elsewhere. In this one, I used Perspective Correction for the straightening, so there is a bit of difference between this and the 1st mod.

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