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Gemma as a Flower

By JackAllTog    
This is Gemma from a few months ago, two more versions of before and after processing. I'm more than happy for any comments on why you might like one more than another etc.
I'm trying for a look i might expect to see in a magazine.

Tags: Gemma Portraits and people Metal Flower

Voters: watchart, carper123, stuart1963 and 9 more


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carper123 Plus
5 943 8 United Kingdom
21 Jul 2012 8:15PM
Hi Stuart, nice one i like the composition and version 1. Well done.
Darryl. SmileSmileSmile

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22 Jul 2012 7:31AM
As a novice v1 for me because you have cloned out (removed) the light stand foot bottom right and the other artefact top right. I think v1 is still a little under exposed. If this was a one or two light set up I think your light sources need to come in closer or need the power increasing. IMHO there is too much shadow. Most magazine shoots, unless going for the look are a lot lighter. Certainly on the right path though. Regards
Ade_Osman 13 4.5k 36 England
22 Jul 2012 10:15AM
V1 is obviously the after? Smile Good work IMHO, the only thing that causes me any concern and again it's being exception picky is the amount of bounced highlights coming off the prop, especially on the lower leaf. But as I said this is being really picky again.....

Ade Wink
JackAllTog Plus
7 4.5k 58 United Kingdom
22 Jul 2012 10:24AM
Many thanks for all the votes & comments - very much appreciated. Picky is good, at the end of the day its the little things that make the difference.
Thanks
Stuart
Richsr 9 91 223 England
27 Jul 2012 11:00AM
Well worked with the processing Stuart, some work would be needed to remove the stray hair near to flower if it was to go into a magazine
Regards Richard
A Booth 14 11 4 United Kingdom
30 Jul 2012 7:02PM
a thoughtful attempt which results in a second glance - points made above need your attention but generally a good result.

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