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Tierful Memorial

By jackwatson
A slightly less abstract view of the jewish memorial in Berlin. Will people please give me some feedback for once! Good or bad I really don't mind.

Tags: Architecture

Voters: User_Removed, jenquest, Beardy and 8 more


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User_Removed 12 17.9k 8 Norway
9 Sep 2005 11:36AM
Excellent abstract Jack.

Maybe a little 'tighter' on the DoF in the FG so that the middle distance and BG 'bleed off' off in focus terms...??

Like it.

Mike

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jenquest 13 561 1 Tokelau
9 Sep 2005 11:39AM
10 mins and no feed back well here's one. I like this. Might be better with a tighter crop though to get rid of the space to the front-left.

Must have been spooky being there.
Beardy 11 79 United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 11:45AM
i would crop out the bottom 1/3 so the floor is visiable, then it would be really abstract.

paul

p.s. one way of getting your photos to be seen is comment more yourselfSmile
Lou41 10 139 United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 11:47AM
Nice shot, LOU
iansamuel 12 271 United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 11:57AM
Nice but definitely lacking something. Maybe less DoF to give blur at the back would help?
patters 11 1.8k 1 United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 1:05PM
nice shot. click, howZAT!
actualy, I was thinking sharper, crop and more contrast so it just looked like patterns
bexter 11 99 Scotland
9 Sep 2005 1:09PM
I like it, but I would agree with cropping out the front and maybe change the DOF. Also might try tweaking the contrast a little to try adding a bit more depth? Don't know how that would look, but just a suggestion!

Becky
dark_lord Plus
12 1.8k 308 England
9 Sep 2005 1:24PM
More contrast, certainly. Possibly add a gradient fill layer and reduce the opacity so that the f/g is lighter than the b/g, darken the corners using a heavily feathered selection to concentrate attention on the blocks reflecting the light in the f/g and middle distance. Just some more thoughts.
Sezz Plus
11 617 15 England
9 Sep 2005 2:28PM
I like the 3d feel to this shot, great patterns, and I like it in B&W. I don't have the technical terms - but maybe a little more contrast would enhance it slightly.

Sez Smile
FrankThomas 13 2.8k United Kingdom
9 Sep 2005 2:35PM
Could do with a touch more contrast I think. That would make it for me
sprock Plus
12 66 1 United Kingdom
10 Sep 2005 12:14AM
For me I think tighter crop to simplify it and put a border on. Maybe alter the tones or level a little in photoshop for more contrast. Apart from that it is still a good image.
10 Sep 2005 3:33AM
Thanks for the feedback. I'll have a play around with the photo and see how I can change it!
xinia 11 54
13 Sep 2005 4:11AM
this is very striking and I agree that a tighter crop would give this a lot more impact

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