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Natrual blue beauty

By jamiicarmenprince  
I wanted to show a large depth of field and show a close up of the beautiful detail on this bird.

Tags: Close-up and macro Digitally manipulated Wildlife and nature

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Focus_Man 7 481 631 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2012 11:56AM
The peacock's head is not sharp and the composition leaves a little to be desired.

Without EXIF (On your last upload, Wille asked you to add it on your next upload if you remember) it is very difficult to comment being as you wanted a large DoF but haven't achieved it.

Compositionally I would have preferred to have the picture taken from ahead of the bird and also more space permitted to teh RHS the way the bird is facing. Given that, it makes the crop somewhat tight.

I hope this has been helpful.

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paulbroad Plus
10 123 1215 United Kingdom
19 Oct 2012 4:29PM
Not enough info to go on. Decent shot actually, a bit of a different angle. I might prefer the depth of field shifted deeper into the image with the crest a little less sharp and the beak more so.

Thanks a lot for feed back i will keep that all in mind. Smile

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