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By JawDborn

Tags: General Minimalist


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mrswoolybill Plus
9 949 1479 United Kingdom
28 Mar 2013 6:04PM
I'm imagining the expressions on the faces of the little audience that assembled behind you as you took this... Wink
Moira

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Jestertheclown 7 7.3k 249 England
28 Mar 2013 6:14PM
Interesting Jack.

The inclusion of the crack in the paint in the bottom right is necessary but to some extent, it dictates the composition of the rest, placing the airbrick pretty close to a thirds intersection.
Now!
You know what I think about that and in this case I think disregarding the RoT, had you been able to, would help.
I reckon that the brick would be better placed somewhere randomly, in the 'wrong' place.

Just a thought.

Bren.
JawDborn Plus
4 1.0k 1 England
28 Mar 2013 6:15PM
Thank you for the comment, Moira. I nearly got run over taking this shot: it's the wall of what used to beSad my local in my drinking days. I'm having a crack at abstract/ minimalist photography, as I 'm a bit tired of dickybirds and flowers.

Jack
rambler Plus
8 644 14 England
28 Mar 2013 6:16PM
Or was the young blonde lady just to quick for you? Smile
JawDborn Plus
4 1.0k 1 England
28 Mar 2013 6:29PM
Thank you for your considered comment, Bren. It was good of you to take the time and trouble. There was a huge crack in the upper right which I spot- healing-brushed out. I left the cracks inthe lower left to balance the picture. I'll take up your suggestions, and experiment a bit.

Cheers,

Jack
JawDborn Plus
4 1.0k 1 England
28 Mar 2013 6:34PM
Lower right, it should have been!
NDODS Plus
5 4.9k 125 United Kingdom
28 Mar 2013 7:02PM
An image which for me works very well.

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin
Joline Plus
10 27 53 United States
29 Mar 2013 11:47AM
This is a superb minimalist image. The little details and cracks in the wall add to it immensely. Very well done.

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