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By JawDborn
Wheels at Tanfield Railway. These were in the old workshop. The growing twigs and the discoloured wall gave the atmosphere of neglect, and the wheels hinted ata busy workshop in times past. I cropped the top of the photo to give balance.
The camera, a compact, was set at ISO 800, as the workshop was gloomy. manipulation in Lighroom 4, to bring out texture in the wall.

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cats_123 Plus
14 4.8k 28 Northern Ireland
9 May 2013 10:28AM
like the framing and the contrasts Smile

have had a go at a mod..just a few changes Smile

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JawDborn Plus
6 1.1k 1 England
9 May 2013 11:14AM
Thank you Jeff. Mod a lot better than the original. Thank you for the info about use of Liightroom:I'm still finding my way round it.


woolybill1 Plus
11 23 72 United Kingdom
9 May 2013 1:36PM
I am impressed by the extreme subtlety of tones in the ironwork for the ISO used.
Very pleasing composition, and one where the white background actually works!
JawDborn Plus
6 1.1k 1 England
9 May 2013 2:19PM
Thank you for the comment Bill. The Fuji X10 in a remarkable camera, and I'm finding it useful for macros of wild flowers and lichens.

banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3866 Canada
9 May 2013 3:40PM
Very nice, tones and mood work well.

My only small suggestion would be to clone out that rusty shaft, bottom left that runs out of the frame. Ive done this in the mod Ive uploaded.


JawDborn Plus
6 1.1k 1 England
9 May 2013 4:01PM
Many thanks for the suggestion, Willie. The cloning out in the mod. certainly improved the photo.Smile


morpheus1955 11 3 2 United Kingdom
9 May 2013 4:42PM
Super image, great composition, textures and tones, I love the curves too

widtink 5 406 2 Scotland
9 May 2013 6:44PM
Great image Jack i love the subtle tones in the metal Smile Iam not going to critique a better tog than me GrinGrinGrin

Alda 5 70 30 United Kingdom
10 May 2013 11:27AM
Nice GrinGrinGrin

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