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By jayhawk2000  
Still a work in progress as I'm not yet happy with a few elements, but maybe some helpful comments will spur me on? Thanks for clicking!

Tags: Portrait Man Male Portraits and people

Voters: pronabk, Cormy, G3 and 3 more


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davey_griffo 6 213 165 England
22 Jul 2010 7:31PM
Excellent. Makes a refreshing change to see a male model.

Perhaps a little off the top? Although I must admit I love the texture in the wall & door frame.

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cats_123 Plus
12 4.4k 25 Northern Ireland
22 Jul 2010 11:22PM
excellent..think his curly hair on his RH side spoils the look..but like the delapidation around him
pamelajean Plus
10 949 1785 United Kingdom
23 Jul 2010 2:34PM
I think you should be fairly happy with this one, Robert. You have made good use of the light coming from the left, considering your model is facing in that direction, and have a good shadow area behind him, too. The background has some good texture, but it's the gold door frame that bothers me because it is so intrusive. I'd like to have seen just the texture on the wall behind him, so perhaps if he had stood a bit more to the right, the door frame may not have been included in the frame. I appreciate that you are trying to bring in the condition of the building, so am sorry about that. I have done a modification where I cloned more wall into the left side, cropped and selectively sharpened the eyes. I'm afraid I cropped off the single nipple, which kept drawing my eye, and is sitting right on the frame edge. I have put the modification on your previous CG image.
Pamela.

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