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autumn light critique

By jayhyk
bit down hearted about my pic's
need some good critique to put me back on track....

Tags: Landscape and travel

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munk 12 United Kingdom
12 Oct 2009 5:35PM
Beautiful light captured here Jay, like the composition.
Keep on clicking.

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Nickscape 10 708 9 England
12 Oct 2009 5:41PM
Gorgeous lighting, perhaps the best you could have hoped for. The end results is really good, the colours are spot on.

Composition wise i really like the tree, i think it might be slightly too left of the frame though as it does quite feel like a feature of the shot at the moment which is should be, i think id also take a step backwards and move the camera higher to get more of those foreground plants in as the light hitting them is perfect but they seem to not be part of the whole scene, rather just poking in at the bottom.

Exposure is very well balanced, the only observation being that the difference in brightness between the water on the right and the sky above the horizon is different, in an indeal world these would match so i think a slightly weaker grad filter would have been better.

I would definatly hang the fininshed version on my wall.

great colour and light.Dave
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3532 Canada
12 Oct 2009 6:50PM
I agree that the foreground elements should be either more prominent, or removed completely. It is a nice scene, can you got the light captured well.

Added a mod for comparison.. We all lose the mojo at time too, - so its usually best to take a break and come back refreshed!


shandoor 7 1 United Kingdom
12 Oct 2009 6:57PM
Beautiful image with superb lighting agree with taking out the foreground as unfortunately the one bit of twig on the right is blurred but a beautiful image all the same
12 Oct 2009 8:28PM
Fantastic image !!!!!

erry 7 Indonesia
14 Oct 2009 6:37AM
Fantastic lighting....

25 Aug 2010 10:11PM
Nice picture. You caught the late sun really well and the dark sky helps well done. Rob

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