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Grimaud

By JE  
I welcome all possible feedback on this one. I really want it to work, but my gut feeling is telling me that it hasn't got a chance. Is the composition too boring? Too much forest? Boring sky?

I was really hoping for some clouds the evening I took this, but unfortunately they werent there to paint the sky for me.

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dharker 10 13 1 United Kingdom
26 Jul 2010 9:58PM
Well I really love the shot JE! The composition is great - I think you've done really well with quite a difficult shot. Great bit of work!
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26 Jul 2010 10:33PM
to much forest john, and i'd take a little off the sky. keep trying it's the only way to learn. good luck.
john
paulbroad 9 114 1047 United Kingdom
26 Jul 2010 10:45PM
Not far off at all. Probably a bit off the sky as it is featureless as you say, but you can't crop the forest much without loosing some of the buildings. I can accept the dark featureless forest area because it is totally evident that this is late evening with the last vestiges of light.

Paul
Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
27 Jul 2010 7:06AM
Hi JE I really do like this as is but am compelled to have a go at a mod. First I corrected the levels as the histogram fell short at the RHS. I then cropped top and bottom to make it more panoramic and focus on the more interesting parts of the scene. Finished off with a touch of unsharp mask.
Hope you like.
Phil
JE 6 Norway
27 Jul 2010 3:37PM
Thanks for all the constructive feedback! It's very helpful. Thanks to Philo also for doing a mod, Im liking it.

John Erik
JE 6 Norway
28 Jul 2010 1:30PM
Ok, I uploaded a modification based on your feedback. I have also darkened det upper corners of the sky a bit just to give a little "depth" to it and also to lead the eye towards the castle a bit more.

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