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knife through the heart

By jenny007
knife through the heart

Tags: General knife tomato black

Voters: ddolfelin, Chinga, CozPics and 3 more


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pablophotographer 9 1.9k 405
18 Nov 2017 4:11PM
Hi,
I find it good as a starting point, you have taken a well known expression and sketching with an image trying to replicate it.

But the pain and the drama are not there. The shooting angle does not show the knife piercing the tomato in the most prominent way. And the only dripping from the knife is a few drops of transparent tomato juice. I think a white background with some extra ketchup splash would make it as brutal as a knife in the heart feels.
And it does hurt a lot, you know?

pablophotographer
jenny007 8 6
18 Nov 2017 5:30PM
thank you pablophotographer for your imput you have some very good points jenny
ddolfelin Plus
9 103 3 Wales
18 Nov 2017 5:32PM
Dramatic and very effective!
jenny007 8 6
18 Nov 2017 5:39PM
thank you for your coment im glad you liked it. i tried to show a good dipiction ddolfelin
Chinga Plus
10 3 2 United Kingdom
18 Nov 2017 5:46PM
You couldn't cut it better! Excellent image, well composed!
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jenny007 8 6
18 Nov 2017 6:33PM
thank you for your coment i was quite pleased the way it turned out chinga

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