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By jessbu
Another photo of my friend on her trampoline. I like the sun on her face, but is it too bright?

Tags: Summer Portrait Fun Action General Sun Jumping Innocent Lighting Girl Trampoline Curly hair Caroline Portraits and people Sports and action

Voters: John Giddings, simont, MrsS and 3 more

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simont 14 2.3k 4 England
1 Nov 2007 8:16PM
Way too bright as you've almost lost all her face.
The washing behind is a bit distracting as well.

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MrsS 11 4.5k 18 England
1 Nov 2007 9:01PM
It is a bit too bright for me, Jess, but it really depends what effect you were aiming for. I do like the light shining through her wrap, tho' Smile

Fran x
bayleaf 10 8 United Kingdom
2 Nov 2007 2:46PM
Would have been much better I feel if you hadn't taken direct into the sun. Maybe you were aiming for the shot to look like this?

Best wishes,

jessbu 10 United Kingdom
2 Nov 2007 3:41PM
thanks for your comments. I wanted an angelic picture and to portray innocence, and the lighting symbolises this but i agree that it is too bright as you need tyo see more detail on her face. Thanks again for your improvement comments


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