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clicknimagine 8 221 88
19 Feb 2010 12:18PM
beautiful portrait...

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saeidNL 8 3 Netherlands
19 Feb 2010 12:18PM
Excellent work .well done,
davey_griffo 9 213 165 England
19 Feb 2010 12:32PM
Excellent portrait.

I don't know whether it's the angle, or the slight burn-out in the corner, but the shoulder is a bit lost. Had the shot been upright, your eye would fill in the blanks, following the line of her hair.

Just a small critique, & not one that detracts from the shot.
fraser 14 631 14 Scotland
19 Feb 2010 12:36PM
I like it, I think Davey's right though and this would be fixed by a square crop taking off the left side of the frame.
johnnyboy114 9 231 106 United Kingdom
19 Feb 2010 4:35PM
I like this just as it the fact that some detail has been it almost a candid feel to it....superbly caught and perfectly processed....
Jestertheclown 9 7.7k 252 England
19 Feb 2010 9:18PM

Quote:the shoulder is a bit lost.

See what you mean Dave although, as you say, it doesn't spoil the shot in any way.
An alternative which I think would work would be to remove the strap and leave the whole corner empty.
Just a thought.
With or without our opinions, it's a great shot Kayleigh.

Edit: Just had a look at you pf.
You obviously like this kind of work and you're obviously pretty good at it. Your images are a bit short on votes but don't let that put you off. That's probably because they're not 'mainstream' enough. Don't be concerned.
Keep it up!

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