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Preparing for Next Day

By johnMathew  
The local fishermen are preparing the nets to go to sea next day.
Exif I dont remember as this is from my collection

Tags: Fishing Beach Fishing boat Landscape and travel

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iancrowson Plus
11 215 168 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2013 11:13AM
Good capture.
An interesting capture showing local activities on this beach.
The picture appears a little dull, you don't show camera settings but it's maybe just a little under exposed due to the camera thinking the scene was brighter than it was due to the large area of sky. A little plus exposure compensation might have helped. It looks like a misty day which does not help.
In my mod I have flipped the image.
On the basis that the eye reads and views from left to right (at least in the western world and India) and the bigger man being the important subject that he should be positioned towards the left of the picture.
The net he is pulling also provides a good lead line in the activity area of the picture.
I've also made a few adjustments in PS, level to increase contrast, increased colour saturation a touch and sharpened a little and increased brightness.
Flipping images is ok unless there is writing or a well know place is pictured. Flipping may be noticed by someone local looking at your picture.
These are my ideas. I hope you get more views, suggestions and comments,
regards
Ian

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12 Apr 2013 1:02PM
iancrowson, This one was a bit old, I dint had the exif embedded in the pic as i created new image as part of PP. Sorry for that , Will take care next time.
12 Apr 2013 1:04PM
And the flipping am seeing for the first time.. Thanks for sharing the idea.
pamelajean Plus
15 1.6k 2224 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2013 8:22PM
You've captured the action very well, John, and the fishermen and boats stand out well from the background.
The shapes being made by the netting, and the net lead-in on the right are nice features. I also like the way the men are both placed in front of the boats, strengthening their connection with them.
The part boat on the left doesn't add anything to the image and just acts as a distraction and, with the large expanse of sand bottom left, the image would benefit from a crop to that side. Such a crop helps to move the fishermen and boats out of the centre of the frame, too.
The sky is quite featureless, and so a crop to that would enhance the image, and the horizon could be set one third down on the vertical, using the rule of thirds as a guide.
In my modification, I did the crops suggested, adjusted levels and painted a bit more blue into the sky, then sharpened. I also cloned out what looks like a bit of rubbish on the right side in the sand. The net being dragged now leads us into the action, and the action takes place in the left two thirds. I didn't flip the image as Ian did, but do like that idea.
Pamela.
paulbroad 13 131 1293 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2013 10:40PM
Interesting image. Wonder why you get the black top and bottom? Conditions look very low contrast with a bland sky but well composed. Might crop some of that sky, though.

Paul

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