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janeez 11 1.8k 8 United Kingdom
6 Apr 2012 2:16AM
This is a great picture and I think it would benefit hugely from a bit more work. By cropping the image so it only has the chair in it you immediately make the title fit the picture. I would then clone out the black cable running across the back of the chair. The crop should also take out the highlighted top right corner as this is quite a dominant feature. Hope you don't mind my critique but I really think it's worth trying out. Smile I would love to see the result.

Jane

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paskinmj 10 11 1 United Kingdom
6 Apr 2012 2:45AM
Great texture and composition.
Matt
photoshy 8 3 United Kingdom
6 Apr 2012 9:15AM
like this image a lot, well done.
stuart.
NDODS Plus
9 5.2k 127 United Kingdom
6 Apr 2012 9:39AM
A lovely image, full of nostalgia, and distant memories.

Regards Nathan
meniko 8 Cyprus
6 Apr 2012 7:33PM
what a stroke of luck to find this mill !
Must be such an enjoyment to keep records of all that stuff there...
Looking forward to see more of it,
thanks for it,
Meniko
Irishkate Plus
9 41 115 United Kingdom
7 Apr 2012 12:36AM
Agree with janeez's comments. the chair is fantastic and would "stand" alone!Well spotted.GrinKate
Jonny5874 10 14 5 United Kingdom
7 Apr 2012 1:19AM
Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated and I've also now uploaded a cropped version with the light blocked out, huge difference!

Thanks,

Jon
helenlinda Plus
12 366 22 United Kingdom
7 Apr 2012 8:07AM
I like the full picture - especially the source of the light and all the textures on the wall - if I was going to do anything at all to v1 it would just be to remove that cable
...............but then we all see things differently SmileSmile
Helen
janeez 11 1.8k 8 United Kingdom
7 Apr 2012 11:31AM
Brilliant crop. I think this works really well. You are so lucky to have this place to photograph. Smile
mikbee 12 3 8 Scotland
9 Apr 2012 11:59PM
A super three legged chair here.
And good grotty wall too !!
Mick.
minter 9 11 United Kingdom
14 Apr 2012 5:19PM
Agree totally with Jane's comments - your version 2 is almost there - just the cable to go!
DO NOT ASKE ME WHY BUT V2........Sad 3 legged chair

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