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Lucy Black and White
Nikon D610
Nikon 50mm f/1.4 @ f/1.4
Converted to black and white in photoshop, smart sharpen used.

Camera:Nikon D610 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50.0 mm f/1.4
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Oct 2013 - 7:39 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Shutter Speed:1/50sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Lucy Black and White
Username:joshwa joshwa
Uploaded:30 Oct 2013 - 11:44 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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banehawi Critique Team 111264 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada3286 Constructive Critique Points
31 Oct 2013 - 3:27 PM

Nice pose and expression. Not esy to get the eye sharp at 1.4, but youve done it here.

I would crop to exclude that buckle(/) on her shoulder, sharpen just a tiny bit more, lift the shadows where her eyes are, and tone down the blown highlight.

Its works as it is, just a few tweaks work also.



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