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Thames Barrier

By KarlmarxEra
Taken around midday this August. I liked the arrows pointing to the middle boat, adding colour to the otherwise grey picture!. Bit lucky to be there when the boat crossed.

Tags: London Architecture Landscape and travel Thames barrier Photography picture Karlmarx

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Slaterm 15 496 1 United Kingdom
16 Nov 2006 2:30PM
the idea is great - light is a bit harsh but that is due to time it was taken - maybe try conversion to b&w to make that less of a problem.

Only other slight problem is that it needs cropping - I'd emphasise the central boat by cropping out on the left to make it more symmetrical.

Overall it is a good shot and a good capture just needs a little work in photoshop and it will be even better.
RipleyExile 18 1.6k 17 England
16 Nov 2006 4:50PM
Like the boat in a central position and the city inbetween the two parts of the barrier. Do agree that a crop is required on the left to make it more symatrical.
ade_mcfade 17 15.2k 216 England
17 Nov 2006 11:13AM
I think you'vor found a good spot for a shot here, never been myself.

the light wasn't on your side though - it's a little flat really. You can add a little contrast in Photoshop, use a curve or something like that.

the boats nice as are the buildings in the background.

one tip is to make the distqance from the edge of the piers to the edge of the frame the same for both piers - you'll get a nice balanced feel then. the left gap is loasd bigger than the right one in this shot
KarlmarxEra 15 305 1 United Kingdom
17 Nov 2006 2:39PM
Thanks for all the comments & for the future comments. I agree i might have to crop a bit on the left side, although cropping makes the boat slightly off centred. But agree the cropped one looks better.

I am average in PS, but after seeing your comments, I realise i need to pickup some more techniques in PS to improve, which i will do. Once again thanks for the constructive feedback.
Carabosse 18 41.6k 270 England
18 Nov 2006 12:12AM
Bump up the contrast in this - it will make quite a difference.
martinduke 17 37 England
19 Nov 2006 9:05PM
I like this shot so much. But must agree with all of the above. It is so worth a re shoot if you can and after you have got to grips with your levels and cropping.
Nice work
Martin

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