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videotec 8 8 United Kingdom
12 Dec 2008 7:08PM
A cracking good shot--Large is a must--Nice one Robert
Regards
Pete

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exposure 12 3.6k England
12 Dec 2008 7:24PM
Twolovely Images Robin I do like v1 for the detail effect and composition but I also like v2 for the abstractness.
Pauline.
snappersue 7 11 United Kingdom
12 Dec 2008 7:25PM
Great shots.
Sue
lonely_oryx 8 61 54 England
12 Dec 2008 7:43PM
Super lighting brings out the patterns well in #2
mrswoolybill Plus
9 927 1463 United Kingdom
12 Dec 2008 8:00PM
I found V1 immediately attractive, V2 is growing on me. Both in different ways make interesting sense out of complex lines.
Moira
Mynett 8 142 6 United Kingdom
12 Dec 2008 8:04PM
Love v2 the structure creating such lovely patterns against the beautiful blue of the water. V1 is also very nice, rather restful tones and gorgeous architecture.
Linda
challicew 8 1 1 South Africa
12 Dec 2008 8:07PM
Love #1
mick183 7 7 5 South Africa
12 Dec 2008 8:17PM
Nice shot. Chris
photophantom 8 108 3 Philippines
12 Dec 2008 8:30PM
An excellent shot in v1. I think you'd done great in v2 by filling it up by lines, a splash of light and reflection. Great work Robert.
Dennis
ketch 8 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
12 Dec 2008 9:45PM
Thank you all so much - of to check out some uploads

Best wishes

Robert
NEWMANP Plus
8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
12 Dec 2008 10:12PM
v2 for me , its a well seen abstract thats lit and saturated and for me says more and grabs my attention far more than the v1 version,
The v1 version is ok but not outstanding or with any real impact. it may well be a good deal stronger as a high contrast mono.
Phil
Diana 9 2.0k 19 Netherlands
13 Dec 2008 12:34AM
V2 rocks for me too... its way more gritty Wink

Diana
OMG 7 51 2 United Kingdom
13 Dec 2008 2:02AM
Both cracking images Robert. They are not fluffy in my opinion, just very natural and deserve a lot of votes.
All the best
Derek
CarolG Plus
9 195 18 Greece
13 Dec 2008 6:46AM
Super composition, Robert, which pier is it? Carol
ketch 8 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
13 Dec 2008 10:39AM
Thanks for your comments much appreciated - its Clevedon Pier Carol north coast of Somerset near Weston Super Mud. I do agree with the comments about V1 it is perhaps a little worthy and also maybe a little flat - V2 certainly excited me more.

Cheers

Robert
ketch 8 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
13 Dec 2008 11:25AM
PS: Thanks for the mod Phil - looks very 1930's now - just need an old steam launch chugging by.

Best wishes

Robert
ade_mcfade 12 15.2k 216 England
13 Dec 2008 2:06PM
V1's the friendly shot I guess, it's accessible, obvious what it is and looks pretty good to me. a bit of human interst with the couple there helps, good side lighting brings out the repeated curves of the metal work.

yeah-pleasing. Never anyu flyffy clouds when you need them though is there?

Smile

V2's not working so well for me, the potential is there, but I'm not sure the balance of elements is quite right - the main reason is that oyu've got the 2 lit arches on the right then a different are to the left. I'm thinking that maybe if you'd slpit the shot into 3 thirds, and had the arces taking up 2/3 rather than 1/2, it may balace up a bit better. It's a hard one though - there's so much goiing on in the shot that it'd push anyone to get a truly striking abstract with a strong focal point.

maby that's it, we've not really for a focal point or something to say "Ahh - that's what the photo is about".

Still - the fact that it's made me think about it and waffel on means it's definitely not a throw away shot !!! maybe just have a play in photoshop and tripm slices off the left and see how it changed the feel
ketch 8 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
13 Dec 2008 2:12PM
Cheers Ade appreciated

Robert
Stace Plus
8 2 2 England
13 Dec 2008 6:14PM
Great captures

Stace
ketch 8 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
13 Dec 2008 6:17PM
Cheers Stace

Robert
Sue_R 10 11 6 Scotland
13 Dec 2008 6:22PM
Definitely V1 for me.

Sue
microchip 9 1 United Kingdom
13 Dec 2008 8:09PM
I like both Images, the pov in V.1 I think is great and the inclusion of the trees seems to frame the Image,and give it some balance,..excellent captures Robert,
Alan
pamelajean Plus
10 958 1818 United Kingdom
13 Dec 2008 9:52PM
Fluffy or Worthy? I don't really get it, but remember reading a forum thread about it. What the hell, I like both of them. I realise there is a vast difference between the images, but they are essentially the same thing. It all depends, imho, whether you like the view or the abstract. I appreciate both. V1 for the composition mainly. V2 for the lines, shapes and colours.
14 Dec 2008 2:58PM
beautiful view (arches)
number 2 is stunning...
Mikelane 9 1 Wales
15 Dec 2008 8:24PM
This is fab ,love all this detail well captured ,regards
Mike
GeorgeRusky 10 1 4
15 Dec 2008 8:43PM
Hi Robert
I like the first variant.
Cheers
GR
16 Dec 2008 8:07AM
Great Version .
18 Dec 2008 8:10AM
Absolutely love the abstract presentation of V2.
Mac
ketch 8 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
18 Dec 2008 11:35AM
Thank you all for your lovely comments - greatly appreciated

Best wishes

Robert
Robert you son of a gun, superb shot
DebbieBMP 7 33 1 United Kingdom
20 Dec 2008 10:11PM
Hi Robert Fantastic shot with such little work done it is good to see shots of this calibre Smile I love V1 but V2 is the one that really gets my attention as it is such an interesting shot.

I thought I recognised that pier my hubby comes from Somerset and loves Clevedon it is so peaceful there - Debbie
User_Removed 12 386 2 United Kingdom
23 Dec 2008 1:13PM
Excellent composition.
Rende Plus
9 38 4 Netherlands
27 Dec 2008 10:43AM
Beautiful composition and lovely light. V2 is brilliant as an abstract!
Rende
Artois 10 405 1 United Kingdom
29 Dec 2008 3:18PM
I like v2, both good shots.
Stella
koka 8 United Kingdom
2 Jan 2009 12:53PM
stunning photography. well shot.. Happy 2009 with your camera..Katie
Juliee 9 382 4 England
2 Jan 2009 7:10PM
I like them both. V1 has nice warm light and a very calm gentle feel to it. V2 is my favourite though, great shadows, lines and reflections.

Julie
10 Feb 2009 9:14PM
V1 a cracking comp and image, do you thik a small crop to reduce the sky might help, though i'm sure youi have played around with crop aspects already, really like this, Rod

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