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BE RESPONSIBLE.....

By kforeman
I put this photo together today as i was walking around taking photos yesterday and the mount of rubbish on the floor it (cheesed)me off

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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DRicherby 8 269 725 United Kingdom
21 Jan 2011 8:15PM
I think this works very well. The can is perhaps slightly over-exposed but it's perfectly sharp and I like the way you've positioned it off-centre in the frame. Putting it there makes it a photo of a space ruined by litter (exactly what you wanted) rather than a photo of the litter. I can imagine this making a good billboard ad in an anti-litter campaign.

I'd tone down the copyright message a bit as, being so bold and central, it looks like the subject of the photo; and the caption wants to be 'Be responsible', without the 'a'.

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kforeman 8 1 England
21 Jan 2011 8:22PM
i know i reliesed when i uploaded it now i cant remember how i did it (derr) well the hospital did say i have brain damage too.

i should know my results of my MRI scan on my hips on monday
DRicherby 8 269 725 United Kingdom
21 Jan 2011 8:30PM
For the 'Be responsible' caption, create a new layer, initially all transparent. Draw a white box and add the text in black. Then decrease the opacity so the image shows through behind it. You can use the same trick with opacity on the copyright message, too.

Good luck with the MRI results!
kforeman 8 1 England
21 Jan 2011 9:02PM
this image is actually two images in one
paulbroad 9 123 1161 United Kingdom
22 Jan 2011 8:20AM
Be a responsible what? A little over exposed and this needs darkening. Why have you put that huge copyright message on a shot in a critique gallery - completely ruins any effect. Sorry, I usually keep fairly quiet on this issue now, but this one is a bit much - not needed at all.

Paul

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