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Remember them (day 2)

By kilo363
I have revisited the raw files and played around a little with them in lightroom. All recropped and lights levels, contrast and sharpening


17-55mm @ 35mm
1/160 sec
iso 100

The soldier is pointing through the gap which has the following inscription inscribed on it

"Through this space a shaft of sunlight fallson the eleventh hour of the eleventh day of the eleventh month"


17-55mm @ 26mm
1/2000 sec
iso 100

This isn't the same shot as yesterday, but the next in sequence. It addresses some of the issues with the original


17-55mm @ 44mm
1/640 sec
iso 100

Another angle on v2

and finally v4

17-55mm @ 17mm
1/500 sec
iso 100

as requested a version of shot at dawn showing the whole statue

I will be away for the weekend, and will be slow at answering and saying thank you, but will be able to read comments on my iPhone

Tags: Photo journalism General National arboretum alrewas

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NeilWigan Plus
7 17 16 England
3 Sep 2010 12:58AM
i am no expert but i think this set is better than yesterdays. From begining to end the order sits better,the poignancy of shot at dawn seems more complete. thank you Neil and family.

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Philo 8 99 83 England
3 Sep 2010 7:24AM
First of all please ignore my first mod as it is the one I did yesterday. Oops!
Indeed another good set of images all well exposed. On V3 I would have liked a little more space on the right to place the column closer to a third. V2 just needs a touch of straightening to remove lens distortion which I have attempted in my mod. V4 is a great alternative to yesterday's version and I really can't fault it.
Great work once again.
kilo363 8 3 Scotland
3 Sep 2010 7:41AM
Thanks Phil, I was aware of the distortion, but don't have the knowledge to correct it. In v3 I would also have liked more space, but it wasn't there Smile I cropped it asbest s I could to give as much space as I could, but I accept and understand your point.

Thank you for comments on v4

It was a series of shots taken while wandering around waiting for people to arrive. I wish I had had more time and my 10-24 lens with me
Philo 8 99 83 England
3 Sep 2010 7:47AM
Ah yes, I think we have all been somewhere at some point with the wrong lens. Very frustrating!

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