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pablophotographer 5 662 269
5 Aug 2012 10:57PM
A shot not to be missed!

Nice execution in black and white.

I like the fact that you included so much of her elderly guardian, especially the hand over Lucy's head. There is a strong contrast of size, age, colour and patterns.

The background is almost unobstructing and uniform. The strong horizontal white lane alarms the spectator, is Lucy sat on a road? The gesture of her guardian does not have a sense of rushing to take her out of there. Although as a concept it exaggerates Lucy's childish unawareness of the adult world aesthetically it should be removed, to my humble opinion. Despite that, it gets my vote.

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kitsch 10 439 4 United Kingdom
6 Aug 2012 5:20PM
Hi Pablo,
thanks for your comment
they are actually in a car park, no cars moving! lol
re: the white line, i never thought of it alarming anyone Smile and funnily enough i like it there, although i suppose it would look ok without it too

anyway, cheers
Jo
ChiliMan Plus
10 135 17 Singapore
7 Aug 2012 5:27PM
I think the white line belongs 'cos it's part of the environment of the moment. Just my take. It doesn't mess with any important lines, anyway.

This is such a tender moment. From two points. One, it is a moment and age where something like confetti is a thing of delight. Two, the lady is patiently waiting for the girl to enjoy her moment and not impatiently pulling her away.

Beautifully captured in black and white, Jo. This sorta shot is what photography is all about.

Andrew
kitsch 10 439 4 United Kingdom
10 Aug 2012 11:00AM
thanks Andrew
this is my fave 'alternative' shot from the whole day Smile
RockArea 10 18 3 United Kingdom
10 Aug 2012 5:20PM
Lovely contrasts and juxtapositions already mentioned. It's a charming shot of this moment and perfect in mono.

David
backbeat Plus
10 134 1 United Kingdom
14 Aug 2012 9:54AM
Tut tut, I'm not sure you should have posed them on the motorway Jo! Wink

A fine wedding candid

Phil
cirrusminor 8 380 3 England
15 Aug 2012 11:41PM
In todays world innocense is fed with fear!

Heart felt by you... it reached out to me!

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