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Can we cross the street now?

By kuipje  
We visited a beautiful bird park in a little town called Alphen aan de Rijn (Rijn = the river Rhine). You could spent a whole day here.That day was a splendid day in Holland
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vogelpark_Avifauna.
As always comments/tips/advise most welcome

V2 is original

Tags: The netherlands Pets and captive animals Bird park Avifauna Alphen aan de Rijn

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IshanPathak 7 202 12 India
24 May 2014 6:44PM
Hello,

V2 is too dark, was the lighting poor? Increasing the Exposure Comp by +1 stop could have been helpful.

V1: Though brightened still bit dull for me but thats down to personal opinion.l

Also its a bit tight, especially form the right and left. A bit more space would have been nice.

Else a nice capture, perfect timing and lovely ...... I dont know which bird it is. Is it a Penguin or Puffins? ( wild guess )
kuipje 7 3 Netherlands
24 May 2014 6:57PM
Thanks Ishan
The lighting was very poor and yes i must remember to increas but things are happened so fast but next time.
Yes the are Penguin.
Thanks for your mod, but personal it's a bit too much fur us. But mods are ALWAYS welcome I learned a lot from them
Regards from the Gouda Cheese Country
Bianca & Jos
IshanPathak 7 202 12 India
24 May 2014 7:29PM
Oops, i know its too much. thing is i was on my pc while uploading and it has a very extraordinary reception. so from that it looked very soft and just sharp, but when i switched on my laptop, saw your comment, rechecked and i was like wow. Did i just did that? Grin

Ill try a softer one and get back to you Smile
pamelajean Plus
15 1.6k 2238 United Kingdom
24 May 2014 8:03PM
It's great to get three inside your frame, Bianca and Jos, and the interest for me lies in the fact that the "twins" are looking one way whilst the other is looking the other way, in a far more disinterested way. I think this lends itself to a number of hilarious captions, e.g. One on the right, "Flippin' 'eck, dinner's taking a long time".

I assume V2 is your original, and very dark, which leads me to say that you recovered it very well in V1.
You have good detail throughout, but a bit more space to either side would be good.
It does have a blue cast, but that can be remedied in post processing.
I feel it could still do with a bit more brightening, too.
Strangely, as we have seen before, the green leaves top right are eye-pulling because the rest of the image is nearly mono.

In my modification I used the Channel Mixer to get rid of the blue, brightened the image, toned down the foliage and selectively sharpened just the eyes and beaks.
I'm a little bit concerned because you didn't like Ishan's modification and I'm not sure why - was it the sharpening?
I also tried a mono version, unusual for me.

An amusing image with a lot of charm and interest.

Pamela.

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