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swan

By Laslo
The image created is one of the canals in Amsterdam from the banks. Came quite close to me, maybe the distance was 2 m.

Tags: Close-up and macro Landscape and travel

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thatmanbrian 5 342 3 Spain
18 Feb 2012 9:50AM
The viewpoint shows off his wings nicely but otherwise is a bit awkward. The water is murky too not helped by the flat lighting. Swans are a difficult subject due to their brilliant white plummage but a touch of sunshine would bring it to life.

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Laslo 4
19 Feb 2012 6:48PM

Quote:The viewpoint shows off his wings nicely but otherwise is a bit awkward. The water is murky too not helped by the flat lighting. Swans are a difficult subject due to their brilliant white plummage but a touch of sunshine would bring it to life.


When I created the image of the sky was very cloudy, no sun. The Canal water was clear, was a gray cloudy. The other thing is that the day I bought the camera, and got to know him. There is still room to practice and learn the use of SLR cameras.
Thank you for your helpful comment.
thatmanbrian 5 342 3 Spain
19 Feb 2012 8:02PM
A bit of food will make a friend for life!Wink Obviously you can't control the weather so I'm sure you'll be returning to him!
pamelajean Plus
10 969 1845 United Kingdom
19 Feb 2012 8:19PM
It's a pretty good shot, Laslo, and although you may get a flatter looking image without any good light, it does help to hold the feather detail in a swan if there is no strong sunlight. Strong sunlight often causes the white plumage to burn out and lose detail.
I wonder if there was a better vantage point from which to take the image, because the beauty of a swan is its sleek and elegant lines, which tend to get lost when you take a picture from above it. Wildlife photographers will advise you to get down to as low a viewpoint as possible and to focus on the eyes. You have more chance of getting the eyes sharp, and of having eye contact, if you are at the swan's level. Of course, this may not have been possible, but is worth remembering for future attempts.
Pamela.

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