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photoshoot of charlotte, 1st use of camera
These are modifications uploaded by other members of the photo above. Download the photo by right clicking Download Photo and clicking Save As.
This is a more appealing photo of Charlotte than your previous one.
However, the busy background does not really help here - something a bit plainer would have been better. The image also has a slightly cool tone and could perhaps do with a touch more contrast via a curves adjustment. I have addressed both issues in the mod I've uploaded for you.
Hope this helps.
a nice shot in general, but the mod above is rather better. DSLR's rarely produce print ready images straight from the camera - they are not designed to. They produce an image ideally suited to some small manipulation in software, as here. The designer assumes the DSLR owner is a bit more enthusiastic than compact owners and will post process.
Possibly would prefer eye contact - get the distinct impression that she is looking at someone else.
I actually prefer the original version. It has a softness that is appealing and the duller background produces greater depth for me.
It is the Charlotte's pose, gaze and expression that attracted me to the image and while I cannot for a moment guess why she would look like that, I do like it very much.
I'm with wellspring on this, I think you've done well . It has the feel of an informal moment being captured, (although you've set out on a photoshoot). Again, I feel the background in the original version works better and focuses more on the subject.
A very attractive image.
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