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The light is stunning again in this but don't think it works as well as the last shot which was wonderful. I think it's the way the cliff is kind of centralised with almost equal gaps at each end and the dominant rock in the FG is also in the centre and bang on a 3rd. It's kind of too ordered if that makes sense? Hope that sounds constructive as it is still a nice image?
Den
Den

Thanks everyone. definitely agree with you Den and Greg - I struggled to try to get the fg rocks in off-centre, and the cliff with plenty of space, but couldn't get it, so this was the compromise. Paced all around the area trying to get the best composition, but this was as good as I could get in a portrait format at the time. I must admit, I nearly always forget the possibility of moving things like rocks - that would probably have given me much more potential for a decent composition. Must try to remember that. 


Hi Leigh, love the colours and formatt ,but tend to agree with others .
My advice would have been to lose the ship inn and turn a wee bit more to the left ,so that you have a bit more space where the cliff ends.
Don't take this wrongly as this is a very good image,and i am the first to seek advice...
warm regds
ollie
My advice would have been to lose the ship inn and turn a wee bit more to the left ,so that you have a bit more space where the cliff ends.
Don't take this wrongly as this is a very good image,and i am the first to seek advice...

warm regds
ollie