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blue eye

By LenaP  
It's my favourite and I think the best of my creations Smile Done with a simple camera, I know the face is too white. Please be brutal and tell me what's wrong with this pic, i'm not too sensitive about it. Thanks Smile

Tags: Portrait Model Photoshop Close-up and macro Digitally manipulated Portraits and people

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magicbox 14 1 United Kingdom
26 Feb 2007 10:31PM
Keep coming back to this.. like the composition, a little to much manipulation is causing a grainy effect,the colours are a a bit to bright.
kitsch 15 439 4 United Kingdom
26 Feb 2007 10:57PM
agree with teena, i'd have just taken the colour down a bit overall, except for the eye maybe?

and i really like the composition also Wink


edit: just realised this is your first post! great start!!! & welcome to EPZ
mikesavage 18 299 2 England
27 Feb 2007 12:01AM
It does look a bit over-saturated, but then again, maybe this is the graphic effect you were after? I like the off-beat composition.
27 Feb 2007 1:42AM
I wouldn't change a thing. It has bags of impact, great expression and I love the sinewy like texture
flaggy 14 4 1
28 Feb 2007 4:54PM
Welcome to EPZ.

Great pic, love the toning and the texture.
Joline Plus
14 30 59 United States
7 Mar 2007 5:09PM
I like the balance of dark and light here, and think you have done a fine job with your manipulations. The white may be a bit too stark, but I like it as it is....has impact and got my attention immediately which is a sign of a good composition, I think. Welcome to the clubSmile
iajacks 15 24 England
26 Mar 2007 3:23PM
a interesting shot.

may have put more fracture and cracks in in the face to give it more texter but its a great consept. well done ian

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