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When in rome do what romans do!!!

By LeonSLR
this was taken whilst on holidays in rome back in June

Tags: General Architecture Landscape and travel

Comments


PeelNStick 15 4 United States
17 Jul 2009 9:56PM
Good architectural composition. I think the shot needs more contrast, however. I have done a mod to eliminate the 'out-of-camera haze'.

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vat 10
18 Jul 2009 3:21AM
Very nice composition. I like the mod version especially the sky.

Vat
pamelajean Plus
13 1.2k 2096 United Kingdom
18 Jul 2009 12:42PM
Hello, Leon. This is very nice, good detail on the architecture and a very nice sky. The image is, however, very pale and flat, has a pinkish colour cast, and the church is leaning to the right. In my modification, I straightened the image, did a small crop because of the straightening, adjusted levels to get some colour and contrast, then sharpened.
Pamela.
NEWMANP 11 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
18 Jul 2009 11:37PM
hi Leon,
interesting subject and location but a few things come to mind when i sit looking at your image,

first thing is the overpowering distortion which can be improved in photoshop.

second is the near mono tones within leave no dominant focal point based on colour and for me make this a great choice for mono, it would strengthen the interesting sky and concentrate on the graphic shapes and qualities of the architecture. i would suggest red channel for contrast.

a slight crop top and left to the centre of the apex of the closest gable helps the composition. a littlemore sharpening after reducing to 72 dpi helps too.

hope this helps
regards,
Phil
LeonSLR 11 1 Wales
19 Jul 2009 4:25PM
cheers guys for your intel will keep it in mind for next shotys cheers leon

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