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Electronic Cigarette

By Liamscottbell
Just finished my first product modelling shoot. Here's one of my favourite images from the shoot. Advice and comments on how i could improve this image would be greatly appreciated.

Tags: Black and white Portraits and people

Voters: fudgy, zebraboy, Daisymaye and 1 more


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fudgy 5 48 United Kingdom
5 Feb 2011 11:00PM
I am in no position to tell you how top improve it ...it looks amazing to me as it is.Smile

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zebraboy 11 197 Australia
5 Feb 2011 11:42PM
Superbly lit, I'd be very happy with that. nice one. M
6 Feb 2011 2:25PM
Looks very good, I might just black out beyond the shadow, it tends to pull my eye from him...........Sandy
Jestertheclown 7 7.3k 249 England
6 Feb 2011 7:12PM
Not much I'd change here either.

I've uploaded a mod. in which I've gone for a square format, increasing the canvas on the right, placing the guy's face on a third(ish) and cloned the pale area that Daisymaye's mentioned above.

I'm not suggesting it's an improvement, just a different slant on it.

Bren.
7 Feb 2011 9:30PM
like the mod however i think i prefer that lil bit on the other side dont know why just do.
11 Sep 2011 12:33AM
I believe that electronic cigarettes are an excellent technology and the potential cost savings to our health care will prove to be tremendous, with this product you can enjoy ecigs anywhere, smokeless cigarettes are a great technology. http://www.ecigaretteit.com/

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