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By lollydeakins  
This is a first attempt at a self-portrait ( and probably the last !) Ive just had all 4 of my wisdom teeth out so I tried to portray how I was feeling in the shot, hence the dark tones....anyway critism and advice needed as always, thankyou ;0)

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: Consulo, pjcurran, firzhugh and 14 more


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Consulo 17 840 10 Scotland
6 Oct 2005 7:01AM
I like it.

Part of me is undecided about the dead space - on the one hand, this is (IMO at least), a sellable image, and some text would fit beautifully nect to it. On the other hand, I want to crop it.....

Hmmm.....

Regardless, I likes. Smile
firzhugh 16 13 New Zealand
6 Oct 2005 7:20AM
very emotional portrait, good composition and lighting
Mixpix 17 1.1k England
6 Oct 2005 10:15AM
Don't give up Lorraine, I like the space on the left. You actually look quite good considering you have been put yourself through legallised torture.

Mick
lollydeakins 16 42 United Kingdom
6 Oct 2005 11:27AM
Thanks all :0) and Mick you should see me now I look and feel like a hamster thats been 12 rounds with an elephant !! lol :0)
I tried different crops but liked this one the best as it added to the mood. Anymore helpful advice is much appreciated :0)

Lorraine.
really looks good. like the space on the left
KBan 16 512 4 United Kingdom
6 Oct 2005 10:51PM
like it!!!
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Keith
thorn 17 124 2 Scotland
7 Oct 2005 3:37AM
Hi Lorraine.Love it.Take care.AnnSmile
Thankyou for your kind comments,much appreciated.
C_Daniels 16 399 10 England
7 Oct 2005 8:37AM
Its a truthfull depiction Lorraine which has its own tender beauty !
I like the crop and expression...

Caleb,
PatrickSmith 16 1.2k 2 United States
7 Oct 2005 12:36PM
This pretty much sums it up. You've captured the feeling well.
Patrick
davidbailie 17 457 7 United Kingdom
9 Oct 2005 7:23AM
Very good mood - your placing in the shot adds well to the effect

Dave
xinia 16 54
12 Oct 2005 7:21AM
strong image
claret 17 49 England
14 Oct 2005 11:56AM
Like this one even more.
Iain
xanda Plus
17 244 2 United Kingdom
15 Oct 2005 5:21AM
Very powerful and emotive portrait. Like it. Click.
iamagoo 17 12 Japan
14 Jan 2006 12:27AM
Love this shot. Really portrays pain, and induces compassion. I don't like the corner of the sleeve pointing at the mouth though.

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