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Paraty, RJ Brazil

By luizdasilva
Picture take in Paraty, RJ - Brazil
Shutter Speed - 1.6
F-stop - f/22
ISO - 100
Used tripod, ND Gradient + PL filters

Tags: Sky Beach Water Ocean Brazil Read Landscape and travel Paraty

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11 Jun 2010 8:38PM
a beautiful shot, i think i would have cropped at bit at the bottom

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8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
11 Jun 2010 10:22PM
i agree, its a pleasant enough scene well catured and nicely balanced with grads. the colours are nice and the focus is as it should be
the left hand boat is maybe a little close to frame but i can accept that it was there and there is little can be done.

overall i feel the position chosen is possibly a little unimaginative and has been taken from an obvious pov without any real lead in or diagonal approach to the form and shape within the composition.

probably the best format for this would be a panoramic with a little less water in the lower part of the frame

regards
Phil
paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2010 7:17AM
A good enough image and lots of quality, but also lots of featureless water, and therin lies your problem. A bit too much nothing, requiring quite a bit off the bottom, but better, zooming in more on detail, such as the boats.

Paul

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